The past is past,
But is it the past or the future?
If the past is alive than is it the future,
So the future is alive too.
Future.
Dead.
Past.
Alive.
Past.
Dead.
Future.
Alive.
In the past we were dead,
In the future we were dead.
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This poem was very confusing and made my brain hurt. But I like the theme of past and future. How do they affect each other? I would start with the line, "The past is past." It's obvious, yet insightful in a way.
ReplyDeletehee hee, it feels like you were trying to be deep here but I wasn't sure what crazy point you were trying to make.
ReplyDeleteI'd say it needs more LENGTH so long as you can come up with more to say.
yeah I think you succeeded at doing some pretty bad poetry. I like where you were going with this whole future past thing. It needs to be longer.
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